Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Regarding the Wave Remix

The voice of me
      my voice
        silent

A glittering smile
     reflects the sun


Every step,  breath.
Every thought,  Every wish.
All thoughts     count
               old memories, new memories
                our future does matter.

The voice of her
     her voice soft
      I love you

This poem is a reflection a man who meets a girl that he falls in love with. He is scared and freezes and does not know how to react to her, all he can do is look, and admire her beauty. He knows that he has had some bad experiences in the past, but now he knows that there is something amazing coming to him. She says in response to his admiration with the words "I love you". Showing the past, future and the present.

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